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My favorite festival There are many festivals around us. However, what is your favorite festival? My favorite festival is the Spring Festival , also known as Chinese New Year or Lunar New Year, is the grandest festival in China, with a 7-day long holiday. Like Christmas in Western countries, Spring Festival is a time to be home with family, chatting, drinking, cooking, and enjoying a hearty meal together. This Spring Festival, I helped my mother clean our house, past Spring Festival couplets, wash dishes, make dumplings etc. My mother said I’d grown up. This Spring Festival was different from the previous ones. Thanks for our doctors and nurses who fight the virus on the frontline. We can stay with my family without any diseases; Thanks for our hero who protect our homes and defend our country. We can stay with my family peacefully; I love Spring Festival! I love my family! I love my country! Thank you for your listening! Can you please help me to correct the mistakes?
2021年3月24日 09:55
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I would change this: My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It is also known as the Chinese New Year or Lunar New Year. It is the grandest festival in China with a 7-day long holiday. During this Spring Festival, I helped my mother clean our house. I don't understand what you are saying here: past Spring Festival couplets, wash dishes, make dumplings etc. Are you trying to say: During Spring Festivals in the past, I would help her, wash, dishes, make dumplings, etc.? hero should be plural: heros I enjoyed learning about your Spring Festival. :) Suzanne
2021年3月24日
Thank you for your attention. During this Spring Festival, I helped my mother clean our house. ------ I want to say, During the Spring Festival 2020, maybe I should say: During last Spring Festival... Because last SF, no one was allowed to walk out. So, many people at home the whole month...
2021年3月25日
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