M Ehtisham Khan
I am a big fan of indian film industry. So according to me( the 3 idiots) is of the best indian movie that i watched recently and i am so impressed from that movie. Being study a mechanical engineering that's why i am so impressed from that movie because 3 idiots movie is just based on engineering knowledge.
#helpmecorrect.
2021年4月22日 15:10
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I am a big fan of the Indian film industry. “The 3 Idiots” is
the best and most impressive Indian movie that I’ve watched recently. I am so impressed by
that movie because it is based on engineering knowledge and I am a student of mechanical engineering.
#helpmecorrect.
You included a lot of extra things that I either took out or revised to be more clear. I also changed the order of words in some of your sentences so that they would make more sense. Let me know if you have any questions!
2022年4月11日
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