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Yesterday, I met my best friend. She had a plan today. I think she is exiting now because she goes to BTS member’s concert. I want to go to his concert too, but I’m not in the membership. Finally BTS will come back this year!! I think there are too many people who want to go to their concerts.. But I will never give up!!! Definitely, I will go to the concert!!!!!!
2025年4月20日 09:20
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Yesterday, I met my best friend. She had a plan for today. I think she is excited now because she is going to a BTS member’s concert. I want to go to the concert too, but I’m not a member. Finally, BTS will come back this year! I believe there are too many people who want to attend their concerts, but I will never give up! I will definitely go to the concert!
Hi Aii! I loved reading about your excitement for your friend's concert! You shared your feelings and determination to go to a BTS concert very clearly, which is fantastic. For improvement, pay attention to verb tenses to make your writing even stronger. Keep dreaming big and don't give up on your concert plans!
2025年4月20日 20:37
Yesterday, I met with my best friend. She had a plan for today. I think she is exited now because she is going to attend a concert performed by a member of the band BTS. I'd also like to go to see his concert but I haven't the right membership. Finally, BTS will come back this year!! I think there are too many people who want to attend their concerts. But I will never give up!!! I will definitely go to their concert!!!!!!
2025年4月20日 10:07
Yesterday, I met my best friend. She had a plan for today. I think she is leaving
now because she is going to the BTS member’s concert. I want to go to his/their concert too,
but I’m not a member.. Finally BTS will come back this year!! I think
there are too many people who want to go to their concerts.. But I will never
give up!!! I will definitely go to the concert!!!!!!
2025年4月20日 09:30
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