Towa
Hello,every one here. Today,I went live of Ado with my freiend. The live is first time for me. It's so enjoed. But I ues a lot of mony to buy goods.forexample penlight and T-shatsu etc. I experienced the best live ever. I want to go Ado live again.
2025年4月27日 03:04
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Hello, everyone. Today I went to a live concert of/by Ado with my friend. This is the first time I've been to a live concert. I enjoyed it so much! But I spent a lot of money buying things, for example a penlight and a T-shirt etc. I experienced the best concert ever. I want to go to an Ado concert again.
This was pretty hard to understand. Judging from another entry here, I'm going to guess you went to a concert. If you say you go to a concert, we can assume it's live, so you don't need to say that it's live. Keep working - I'm sure you'll improve.
2025年4月27日 06:20
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