Sanem
Can you correct my text please ? Thank you in advance.
I used to practise Yoga before and i noticed some benefits .My mindset starts to change .I had started to think more positiv in my life .The another benefit is my body came more flexibal and i feel like it is relaxing .
It is good to have some activity in our life and yoga can be first step to have some activity .
2024年10月25日 17:19
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I used to practise yoga before and I noticed some benefits. My mindset started to change. I started to think more positively in my life. Another benefit is my body became more flexible and I felt more relaxed. It is good to have some activity in our life and yoga can be a first step to have some activity.
Some corrections above. I've had similar benefits from yoga in my life as well 🧘♀️. Thanks for sharing and practicing your writing!
2024年10月30日 10:39
Can you correct my text please ? Thank you in advance. I used to practise Yoga
before and i noticed some benefits .My mindset started to change .I had started
to think more positively in my life .Then, another benefit is that my body became more
flexible and i felt like it was relaxing . It is good to have some activity in
our life and yoga can be first step to have some activity .
Just pay attention to what tense you're using! Very good though, and I appreciate the positive subject matter.
2024年10月25日 17:26
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