Helen
Since China has announced new measures rolling back COVID-19 restrictions, including limiting lockdowns and testing requirements, more and more people are infected and will be infected. It seems everyone is preparing medicines and waiting to be infected. My girlfriends and I had a group chat via WeChat this morning and we discussed how to deal with it if we were to be tested positive. We talked about some specific things and it seemed not that scary any more. The biggest terror is terror itself. If we have already known what to do when something bad happens, it will not so terrible any more.
2022年12月12日 11:48
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Since China announced new measures rolling back COVID-19 restrictions, including limiting lockdowns and testing requirements, more and more people are becoming infected and will be infected. It seems everyone is preparing medicines and waiting to be infected. My girlfriends and I had a group chat via WeChat this morning and we discussed how to deal with it if we were to be tested positive. We talked about some specific things and it seemed not to be that scary any more. The biggest terror is terror itself. If we have previously experienced what to do when something bad happens, it will not be so terrible any more.
You sound like a news broadcaster in the first half. But you really really really need to use more contractions: I've, we've, they've, shouldn't, wouldn't, couldn't, haven't, didn't, won't, wasn't and so forth. It's just better on a lot of levels. It's tedious to read "it will not" when "it won't" would've done it.
2022年12月12日
Since China announced new measures rolling back COVID-19 restrictions, including limiting lockdowns and reducing testing requirements, more and more people are becoming infected. It seems everyone is preparing with pharmaceuticals and just waiting to become infected. My girlfriends and I spoke on WeChat this morning and discussed how to deal with it if we tested positive. We talked about some specific concerns and now we are not as scared. The biggest fear is for the fear itself. If you already know what to do when a certain bad thing happens, it will not be as frightening any more.
US President Franklin Delano Roosevelt said:"We have nothing to fear but fear itself"
2022年12月12日
Since China has announced new measures rolling back COVID-19 restrictions, including reducing both lockdowns and testing requirements, more and more people are becoming infected and will become infected. It seems everyone is buying medication in advance in case they become infected. My friends and I had a group chat on WeChat this morning and we discussed how to deal with it if we were to test positive. We talked about some specific things and now it seems not that scary any more. The biggest fear is fear itself. If [we already know]/[we have already planned] what to do when something bad happens, it will not so terrible any more.
"both" is one way to make it clearer that there are fewer lockdowns and fewer testing requirements. Some others have suggested different solutions. "girlfriend" is someone you are dating. Women grandparent's generation uses it to mean friends who are girls, but most people do not. I agree on the formality with SylviaS--you don't need to use contractions, but you can if you want to. I hope you and your friends stay safe
2022年12月12日
Since China has announced new measures rolling back COVID-19 restrictions,
including limiting lockdowns and testing requirements, more and more people are
infected and will be infected. It seems everyone is preparing medicines and
waiting to be infected. My girlfriends and I had a group chat via WeChat this
morning and we discussed how to deal with it if we were to be tested positive.
We talked about some specific things and it seemed not that scary any more. The
biggest terror is terror itself. If we have already known what to do when
something bad happens, it will not so terrible any more.
Wonder why this is happening in China alone ? Rest of the world, I believe has zero restrictions nowadays!
2022年12月12日
Since China has announced new measures rolling back COVID-19 restrictions, including limiting lockdowns and testing requirements, more and more people are infected and will be infected. It seems everyone is preparing medicines and waiting to be infected. My girlfriends and I had a group chat via WeChat this morning and we discussed how to deal with it if we were to be tested positive. We talked about some specific things and it seemed not that scary any more. The biggest terror is terror itself. If we had known what to do when something bad happens, it would not so terrible any more... there is not to much wrong with your writing any English writing no matter what. can be torn apart by other correctors expressing their favourite way of writing. So for this reason I have left you to take into consideration the other corrections but take note of the two errors at the end. IF WE HAD KNOWN have/had for past tense. WOULD NO BE for past tense to replace no so terrible anymore
2022年12月12日
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