italki544565
我和我的祖国 is one of my favorite move and also i think we can understand the history and culture of chine more easely by watch this move,and many celebirities show on this move,like 葛优，黄渤，etc.that is the one of reason why i'm love this move.
2022年3月8日 02:03
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受邀老师
我和我的祖国 is one of my favorite movies because it helps us understand the history
and culture of China in a more simplified manner. By watching this movie along with many celebrity shows on this movie such as 葛优，黄渤，etc, we can further expand our understanding of the culture.
You used "move" instead of "movie" throughout the paragraph so be a little more careful with that. I wasn't sure if I understood well what you wished to say, so I hope my correction reflected your ideas.
2022年3月8日
我和我的祖国 is one of my favorite movies and I think we can understand the history
and culture of chine more easily by watching this movie, and many celebirities appear
in this move, like 葛优，黄渤，etc. That is one of the reasons why I love this movie.
2022年3月8日
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