千山皓月
To whom it may concern,
I saw you are taking on volunteers and would like to offer to share my experience in cooking. Are you still accepting volunteers from this June to August? I am passionate about cooking because we can avoid all the preservatives and other ingredients that are so unhealthy.
At the moment, I am working at a British school. During my school holidays, I have a lot of time available, so I am eager to take on meaningful work related to my passion. I have been volunteered in Thailand to tutor Mandarin after school, I also help cook, make Khanom Nap | Sweet Sticky Rice Coconut Dumpling during the daytime when the students go to school.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your reply.
Best Regards,
2025年1月20日 05:45
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To whom it may concern,
I saw you were taking on volunteers and would like to offer to share my experience in cooking. Are you still accepting volunteers from this June until August? I am passionate about cooking because we can avoid all the preservatives and other ingredients that are so unhealthy.
At the moment, I am working at a British school. During my school holidays, I have a lot of time available, so I am eager to take on meaningful work related to my passion. I have volunteered in Thailand, tutoring Mandarin after school. I also helped with cooking and making Khanom Nap | Sweet Sticky Rice Coconut Dumpling during daytime when the students went to school.
Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your reply.
Best Regards,
It's unclear what tense the Thailand activities should be, whether it's something you still do or not. Since it's a formal letter, I won't harp about your lack of contractions.
2025年1月20日 11:07
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