Lucy Portela
An english native speaker could help me, please? I'm supposed to send a presentation vídeo in english to my agency, and I'm not sure about the grammar. Here ir my speech: Hey everyone, how's it going? I'm Lucy Portela, a Brazilian actress and I'm here to talk a little bit of my work. I decided to be an actress when I was 30 years old. A little bit late, isn't it? Well, I studied at the Tatuí Dramatic and musical conservatory's about nine years ago. Yes, I'm 39. Since I've started acting, I worked on many plays, not only in drama school but also in others independent groups I could take part. I played different characters in my career, I was a depressed mother on a Sergio Roveri's play, a romantic harlot in "Razor in the Flesh" by Plínio Marcos and of course, I could not run from the classic ones, in Antigone by Sófocles I was one of the old theban man. Besides working on stage, I made some short movies, and many TV commercials to. You can see them all in my website, Vimeo or my YouTube channel. I hope you enjoy this video and maybe we can work together. See you.
2021年2月6日 23:52
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Could an English native speaker help me, please? I'm supposed to send a presentation video in English to my agency, and I'm not sure about the grammar. Here is my speech: Hey everyone, how's it going? I'm Lucy Portela, a Brazilian actress and I'm here to talk a little bit about my work. I decided to be an actress when I was 30 years old. A little bit late, no? Well, I studied at the Conservatory of Tatuí about nine years ago. Yes, I'm 39. Since I started acting, I’ve been in many plays, not only in drama school but also in other independent groups. I’ve played various characters in my career: a depressed mother in a Sergio Roveri's play, a romantic harlot in "Razor in the Flesh" by Plínio Marcos, and of course I haven’t escaped from the classic ones, in “Antigone by Sophocles” I was one of the old Theban man. Besides working on stage, I’ve made some short movies and many TV commercials too. You can see them all on my website, Vimeo, or YouTube channel. I hope you enjoy this video and maybe we can work together. See you. “Hey everyone, how's it going?” could be a bit too informal, but it depends on how relaxed the people are that you’re talking too. Same probably with “see you”.
2021年2月7日
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Going with what sounds good to me. And I ran it through Grammarly. Hey everyone, how's it going? I'm Lucy Portela, a Brazilian actress and I'm here to talk a little bit about my work. I decided to be an actress when I was 30 years old. A little bit late, isn't it? Well, I studied at the Tatuí Dramatic and musical conservatory about nine years ago. Yes, I'm 39. Since I've started acting, I've worked on many plays, not only in drama school but also with other independent groups. I've played different characters in my career. I was a depressed mother in a play by Sergio Roveri and a romantic harlot in "Razor in the Flesh" by Plínio Marcos. And, of course, I could not run from the classics, performing in Antigone by Sophocles. I was one of the old Theban men. Besides working on stage, I made some short movies and many TV commercials. You can see them all on my website, Vimeo, or my YouTube channel. I hope you enjoy this video, and maybe we can work together. See you.
2021年2月7日
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