Introduction Paris is the capital AND THE most populous city of France. It's located in the north central part of France along the Seine River. There are many famous places in Paris,but here are the top three famous places you must definitely visit one day! The first place that would come into your mind is The Eiffel Tower or in french La Tour Eiffel. And do you know why it's the most famous place in France? It's simply because The Eiffel Tower symbolizes Paris and gives you spectacular city views from three levels. The second most visited place is The Louvre Museum. This enormous Louvre Museum receives over 10 million visitors a year. The third must visit place is THE Latin Quarter. If you want to experience an older PART OF Paris,spend some time discovering the charms of the Latin Quarter. The history of Paris dates back to approximately 259 BC. The Parisii were a group of tribal fishermen who, pushed by emigration towards the banks of the Seine, made a permanent settlement there and profited from the area's fertility and temperate climate. When to go? Spring and summer are the best times to visit Paris. The weather is perfect for sightseeing and there are numerous festivals that the city hosts to that add to the cheer and I am sure that you all like festivals right? I mean who doesn't?You'll experience crowds from May to September, but encounter the most people in July followed closely by June and August. I would recommend you visiting between October and April if your main objective is to avoid crowds. Well done. You’ve written it well. Just a few feet small corrections. You do repeat certain words a lot, close together. So although it’s not a mistake to do so, how about trying to rewrite these sections? For example you say Louvre Museum twice, very close together Try to find an alternative way of writing it the second time? And you use the word crowds a lot at the end. How about a synonym. People?

Introduction Paris is the capital most populous city of France. It's located in the north central part of France along the Seine River. There are many famous places in Paris,but here are the top three famous places you must definitely visit one day! The first place that would come into your mind is The Eiffel Tower or as in french La Tour Eiffel. And do you know why it's the most famous place in France? It's simply because The Eiffel Tower symbolizes Paris and gives you spectacular city views from three levels. The second most visited place is The Louvre Museum. This enormous Louvre Museum receives over 10 million visitors a year. The third must visit place is Latin Quarter. If you want to experience an older Paris,spend some time discovering the charms of the Latin Quarter. The history of Paris dates back to approximately 259 BC. The Parisii were a group of tribal fishermen who, pushed by emigration towards the banks of the Seine, made a permanent settlement there and profited from the area's fertility and temperate climate. When to go Spring and summer are best times to visit Paris. The weather is perfect for sightseeing and there are numerous festivals that the city hosts to add to the cheer and I am sure that you all like festivals right? I mean who doesn't?You'll experience crowds from May to September, but encounter the most people in July followed closely by June and August. I would recommend you visiting between October and April if your main objective is to avoid crowds.