Hard Work Is Never a Waste
One farmer was very <s>old. He</s> old and was dying. <s>on the death bed</s>.<a id="_anchor_1" class="msocomanchor" name="_msoanchor_1" href="#_msocom_1">[CAM1]</a> He told his sons,"<em> </em><em>I</em><em></em><em>have</em> buried <s>or laid low</s> immense wealth in the fields. After my death, you dig it up." After saying this, he <s>kicked the bucket</s><a id="_anchor_2" class="msocomanchor" name="_msoanchor_2" href="#_msocom_2">[CAM2]</a> died. <s>After his death, former's</s> The farmer’s sons thought that they should search for the hidden treasure. They took their spades and went to the fields. They dug every inch of the fields but could not find anything. <s>Being </s>Disappointed, they went to their mother and <s>narrated</s> told her the whole story. Their mother was a judicious woman. She said, "You have <s>done</s> exerted great effort; now you should sow something in the fields. <s>may be</s> Maybe your hard work will <s>brings fruit</s> be fruitful." They did so. This year’s bumper crop grew <s>up</s> and they became rich.
<a class="msocomoff" href="#_msoanchor_1">[CAM1]</a>You could use either “he was dying” or “he was on his death bed”
<a class="msocomoff" href="#_msoanchor_2">[CAM2]</a>“Kicked the bucket” is a very slang expression and not really a good choice here.
Hard work never waste Hard work never goes to waste
One farmer was very old. Once, there was a very old farmer.
He was dying on the death bed. He was dying. OR He was on his deathbed.
He told his sons," He has buried or laid low immense wealth in fields. After my death you dig it." He told his sons, "I have buried (or hidden) immense wealth in the fields. After my death, you dig it up". OR He told his sons that he had buried (or hidden) immense wealth in the fields, and that after his death, they should dig it up.
After this he kicked the bucket. After this, he passed away. "Kicked the bucket" is very informal.
After his death, former's the farmer's sons thought that they should search for the hidden treasure.
They took the spades and went to the fields.
They dug every inch of the fields but could not find anything.
Being disappointed they went to their mother and narrated to her the whole story.
Their mother was a judicious woman.
She said," You have done made great effort, now you should sow something in the fields, may be your hard work will brings fruit."
They did so.
This year bumper crop grew up and they became rich.
The first half has many mistakes, but the second half is quite well done.
Hard work never waste
One farmer was very old. He was dying on the death bed. He told his sons,"<em> I</em> <em>have</em> buried or laid low immense wealth in fields. After my death you dig it." After this he kicked the bucket. After his death, former's sons thought that they should search for the hidden treasure. They took the spades and went to the fields. They dug every inch of the fields but could not find anything. Being disappointed they went to their mother and narrated her the whole story. Their mother was a judicious woman. She said," You have done great effort, now you should sow something in the fields, may be your hard work brings fruit." They did so. This year bumper crop grew up and they became rich.
