An (formal)essay Topic: The computer has greatly improved our lives today. The computer is not only an advice that young people use for playing games. We can do a plenty of things with them. They h

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An (formal)essay Topic: The computer has greatly improved our lives today. The computer is not only an advice that young people use for playing games. We can do a plenty of things with them. They have many advantages in this world where communication is very important.However, there are also some drawbacks. On the one side, they enable us to communicate with other people wherever they are.For example, if you want to chat with a foreign language partner for practise your spoken English. You can do this with a computer programme called Skype. Another advantage is that you can save time doing your work on the computer. Nowadays, almost all companies need this advice for work. On the other hand, young people normally use this device for playing games or chating and they do not go outside. They spend many hours at home instead of playing football or another sport with their real friends. In conclusion, computers have improved our lives,but we have to be responsable about how and when we use them.

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An (formal)essay

Topic: The computer has greatly improved our lives today.

The computer is not only an advice device that young people use for playing games. We can do a plenty of things with them. They have many advantages in this world where communication is very important.However, there are also some drawbacks.

On the one side [Do you mean "On the one <em>hand</em>"?], they enable us to communicate with other people wherever they are.For example, if you want to you can chat with a foreign language partner for to practise your spoken English. You can do this with a computer programme called Skype. Another advantage is that you can save time doing your work on the computer. Nowadays, almost all companies need this advice advantage for work.

On the other hand, young people normally use this device for playing games or chating and they do not go outside. They spend many hours at home instead of playing football or another sport with their real friends.

In conclusion, computers have improved our lives,but we have to be responsable about how and when we use them.