Today I am <em>writing</em> an essay about the <em>difference</em> between traveling <em>in the </em>past <em>and present</em>. In <em>the </em>first paragraph, I am going to write about <em>the </em><em>advantages</em> and <em>disadvantages</em> <em>of</em> traveling now. Then, in second paragraph, I will write about the <em>modes of</em> travel in the past.
     Nowadays, we can travel <em>any</em>time. People travel by car, coach, <em>and </em>aeroplane [plane]. Everyday, people use cars and public transportation to go <em>to </em>work, or <em>take daytrips</em>. <em>Cars</em> are very helpful, because people can visit <em>many places</em> in <em>a</em> day. However; cars, coaches, <em>and</em> other means of transportation <em>pollute</em> the air and <em>are</em> dirty. This <em>situation</em> makes the city an <em>inappropriate</em> place to grow up.
     Twenty years ago, <em>many</em> means of transportion that we know today <em>were not yet invented</em>. On the other hand, means of transportation <em>existing</em> <em>then</em> weren't <em>often utilized. </em><em>Indeed, many</em> people didn't <em>own a</em> car. Cars were expensive and less confortable, so people <em>had to save</em> money for many years to buy a car.
     <em>Again,</em> <em>at present, </em>people <em>may</em> travel <em>anytime</em>, but twenty years ago, they couldn't do it as easy as now. If technology hadn't avanced as it <em>has</em>, we wouldn't <em>know</em> about travel <em>as we do</em>. Technology makes our <em>lives</em> more confortable, and transportation<em> plays</em> <em>a big</em> part <em>in that.</em>

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<em>You failed to write about the modes of travel in the past in the 2nd paragraph. </em>

Traveling now and twenty years ago.

Hi guys! Today I am going to write an essay about the differences between travelling now and in the past. In the first paragraph I am going to write about advantages and disadvantages about travelling now. Then, in thesecond paragraph, I will write about the way to travel in the past.

Nowadays, we can travel anytime. People travel by car, by coach, by aeroplane... Everyday, people use cars and public transport to go work or to do trips per day. These things are very helpful because people can visit a lot of places in one day. However, the cars, coaches or others means of transport pollute the air and it is dirty. This situation makes the city a place which is not appropriate to grow up in.

Twenty years ago, there hadn't been invented a lot of means of transport that we know today. On the other hand, means of transport that existed in these times, weren't often used and people sometimes didn't have a car. Indeed, cars were more expensive and less comfortable, so people had to get money for many years so they could buy a car.

According to what I have been saying, people can travel nowadays anytime, but they couldn't do it as easily as now twenty years ago. If technology hadn't avanced as it it has done, we wouldn't have known about travel like we would. Technology makes our life more comfortable, and the improved transport is part of that.