Leonardo
Tense practise Today (be) is the second day of my trek around Mount Annapurna. I am exhausted and my legs (shake) are shaking ; I just hope I am able to complete the trek. My feet (kill, really) are really killing me and my toes (bleed) are bleeding, but I (want, still) still want to continue. Nepal is a fascinating country, but I have a great deal to learn. Everything (be)is so different, and I (try)'m trying to adapt to the new way of life here. I (learn)’ve learnt a little bit of the language to make communication easier; unfortunately, I (learn, not)don’t learn foreign languages quickly. Although I (understand, not)have not understood much yet, I believe that I (improve, gradually) will improve gradually . I (travel, currently)am currently travelling with Liam, a student from Leeds University in England. He (be)is a nice guy, but impatient. He (walk, always)always walks ahead of me and (complain) complains that I am too slow. I (do)‘m doing my best to keep up with him, but he is younger and stronger than I am. Maybe, I am just feeling sorry for myself because I am getting old. Right now, Liam (sit) is sitting with the owner of the inn. They (discuss)are discussing the differences between life in England and life in Nepal. I (know, not)don’t know the real name of the owner, but everybody just calls(call, just) him Tam. Tam (speak) speaks English very well and he (try) is trying to teach Liam some words in Nepali. Every time Tam (say)says a new word, Liam (try)tryes to repeat it. Unfortunately, Liam also seems(seem, also) to have difficulty learning foreign languages. I just hope we don't get lost and have to ask for directions.
2014年11月12日 23:59
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<em>OMG this is such good work! I only have a two small things to suggest.</em>

 

I (know, not) don’t know the real name of the owner, but everybody just calls (call, just) him Tam.

 

<em>I understand this perfectly, but it's not the most natural way to say it. A more natural way would be "I don't know the owner's real name, but everybody just calls him Tam."</em>

 

Every time Tam (say) says a new word, Liam (try) tryes tries to repeat it. 

 

<em>And that's it. Muy (muy, muy!) buen trabajo!! :-)</em>

2014年11月13日
Tense practise

Today (be) is the second day of my trek around Mount Annapurna. I am exhausted and my legs (shake) are shaking ; I just hope I am able to complete the trek. My feet (kill, really) are really killing me and my toes (bleed) are bleeding, but I (want, still) still want to continue.

Nepal is a fascinating country, but I have a great deal to learn. Everything (be)is so different, and I (try)'m trying to adapt to the new way of life here. I (learn)’ve learnt a little bit of the language to make communication easier; unfortunately, I (learn, not)don’t learn foreign languages quickly. Although I (understand, not)have not understood much yet, I believe that I (improve, gradually) will improve gradually .


I (travel, currently)am currently travelling with Liam, a student from Leeds University in England. He (be)is a nice guy, but impatient. He (walk, always)always walks ahead of me and (complain) complains that I am too slow. I (do)‘m doing my best to keep up with him, but he is younger and stronger than I am. Maybe, I am just feeling sorry for myself because I am getting old.

Right now, Liam (sit) is sitting with the owner of the inn. They (discuss)are discussing the differences between life in England and life in Nepal. I (know, not)don’t know the real name of the owner, but everybody just calls(call, just) him Tam. Tam (speak) speaks English very well and he (try) is trying to teach Liam some words in Nepali. Every time Tam (say)says a new word, Liam (try)tryes to repeat it. Unfortunately, Liam also seems(seem, also) to have difficulty learning foreign languages. I just hope we don't get lost and have to ask for directions.
2020年4月21日

Tense practise

Today (be) is the second day of my trek around Mount Annapurna. I am exhausted and my legs (shake) are shaking ; I just hope I am able to complete the trek. My feet (kill, really) are really killing me and my toes (bleed) are bleeding, but I (want, still) still want to continue.

Nepal is a fascinating country, but I have a great deal to learn. Everything (be)is so different, and I (try)'m trying to adapt to the new way of life here. I (learn)’ve learnt a little bit of the language to make communication easier; unfortunately, I (learn, not)don’t learn foreign languages quickly. Although I (understand, not)have not understood much yet, I believe that I (improve, gradually) will improve gradually .


I (travel, currently)am currently travelling with Liam, a student from Leeds University in England. He (be)is a nice guy, but impatient. He (walk, always)always walks ahead of me and (complain) complains that I am too slow. I (do)‘m doing my best to keep up with him, but he is younger and stronger than I am. Maybe, I am just feeling sorry for myself because I am getting old.

Right now, Liam (sit) is sitting with the owner of the inn. They (discuss)are discussing the differences between life in England and life in Nepal. I (know, not)don’t know the real name of the owner, but everybody just calls(call, just) him Tam. Tam (speak) speaks English very well and he (try) is trying to teach Liam some words in Nepali. Every time Tam (say)says a new word, Liam (try)tryes to repeat it. Unfortunately, Liam also seems(seem, also) to have difficulty learning foreign languages. I just hope we don't get lost and have to ask for directions.
2018年4月17日
Thanks! :D
2014年11月13日
Perfect! I see no mistakes. Great job!
2014年11月13日
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