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My favorite paiter: Salvador Dalí Salvador Dali is considered one of the important painter of surrealism, was born in Spain on May 11, 1904, he was a writer, painter and sculptor. Began with the Renaissance art, Dalí was also very good in photography and film. One of his most famous works is The Persistence of Memory, also known as the soft watches, this work was developed in 1931 and says he was inspired by seeing some pieces of camembert cheese that were melting in the sun, also as a reference the theory of relativity of Einstein, I donn´t know why all clocks always mark the six. I chose this work because I like the surrealist painting apart from as Salvador Dali, another painter that I like is Remedios Varo, painter of surrealism in my country A very interesting life of Salvador Dalí point is that before he was born, his mother had a son that he named Salvador. Dalí's older brother, also named Salvador (born October 12, 1901 and christened Salvador Galo Anselmo), had died of an "infectious catarrh gastroenteritic" nine months earlier (on August 1, 1903). This marked the artist much later, who came to have a personality crisis, believing that he was the copy of his death brother. His father, Salvador Dalí, was middle-class lawyer and notary, of strictness tempered by his wife Felipa i Domenech Ferres, who encouraged the artistic interests of the young Salvador. At five, his parents took him to the grave of his brother and told him he was his reincarnation, an idea he came to believe. About his brother, Dalí said: ... We seemed to us like two drops of water, but we took different reflections ... My brother was probably a first glimpse of myself, but as a concept too absolute
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My favorite paiter: Salvador Dalí

Salvador Dali is considered one of the important painters of surrealism, he was born in Spain on May 11, 1904, he was a writer, painter and sculptor. Began with the In the begining Dalí was a renaissance artist, Dalí he was also very good in at photography and film.
One of his most famous works is 'The Persistence of Memory', also known as the soft watches. This work was developed in 1931 and he said he was inspired by seeing some pieces of camembert cheese that were melting in the sun. This was also as a reference to Einstinen's the theory of relativity of Einstein, I donn´t know why all the clocks always mark the show six o'clock.
I chose this work because I like the surrealist painting (painting style or painters) apart from as Salvador Dali. Another painter that I like is Remedios Varo, painter of surrealism in from my country.
A very interesting fact about life of Salvador Dalí's life point is that before he was born, his mother had a son that she named Salvador.
Dalí's older brother, also named Salvador (born October 12, 1901 and christened Salvador Galo Anselmo), had died of an quite; infectious catarrh (I am not sure what you mean by this?) gastroenteritic gastroenteritis (?) quot; nine months earlier (on August 1, 1903). This marked scarred the artist much later for life, who came to have a personality crisis, believing that he was the copy of his dead th brother. His father, Salvador Dalí (his father was named the same thing or do you mean the father of Salvador Dalí), was middle-class lawyer and notary, of strictness tempered he was strict and had a temper by with his wife Felipa i Domenech Ferres, who encouraged the artistic interests of the young Salvador. At five, his parents took him to the grave of his brother and told him he was his reincarnation, an idea he came to believe. About his brother, Dalí said:
... We seemed to us be like two drops of water, but we took different reflections ... My brother was probably a first glimpse of myself, but as a concept too absolute.

2015年9月29日
Good work, watch out for run on sentences (sentences that go on too long using commas) Instead try breaking them up into multiple sentences. This will make your work easier to understand.
2015年9月29日
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