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Michael Jackson: A kind-hearted person When it comes to Michael Jackson, what will come to your mind first?He was a super star, an actor, a dancer, or a singer? For me, the answer is: he was a kind–hearted person who was so devoted to making our world a better place throughout his life. Michael Jackson is usually remembered as a great entertainer and he did contribute a lot to the world of entertainment. However, we might easily neglect his contribution to the world of charity as a humanitarian and charitarian, which was no less than his contribution to singing and dancing. As a celebrity, Michael Jackson made full use of his public influence to spread the idea of love and peace. Believing that music has the magical power to make an impact on people's mind, he wrote many songs to encourage people to make our world a better place. For example, he wrote We Are the World to help the starving people in Africa, he wrote Earth Song to draw people’s attention to environmental protection, he wrote What More Can I Give right after 911 attacks to call on people to donate money… He wrote countless affectionate songs like these in an effort to make our world a better place. Apart from his songs, Michael Jackson also told us to make our world a better place by addressing speeches and writing essays. For example, In his 2001 Oxford speech, he portrayed an image of his miserable childhood to show the necessity of caring more about our children and family, which affected and motivated a lot of people. In his essay But the Heart Say No, his profound understanding of our society aroused a heated discussion about disadvantage groups at that time. From his speeches and essays, we can learn something new from his thoughts and make our world a better place under the influence of him. Not only did Michael Jackson tell us so, but also he did so. He put his idea of making the world a better place into practice in many ways, rather than only paying lip service like some of the celebrities. From 1970 to 2009, Michael Jackson kept wearing an armband almost in all of his shows. His armband had a symbolic meaning: Remembering all the children that are suffering around the world. Also, according to Guinness World Records, Michael Jackson supported more charitable organizations than any other artist in the world. Michael Jackson was such a kind-hearted person with kind thoughts, kind words, and kind deeds.
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2015年12月21日
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2015年12月20日
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