My father
I went to see my father tonight.
He
had only barely heard
a little bit my voice
from me,
just and he opened the door.
With His right ear can not hear
my voice any more, only
with the left ear can hear a little bit. He
had got has diabetes.
We chatted more, I was sitting beside him. He said he is afraid. I understand he fears something. I feel that every old person will has
the that feeling. I comforted him. I said:" Maybe
it is not only you, actually all people will think of that when they are old......" It sounds like nonsense. (T_T) Then I spoke
about the topics
what1* that he likes. He felt happy. He hope
s I can take him and my mother to take the subway in Changsha city later. He hope
s he can go to countryside to rest in Jiangsu province. I will arrange it.
I
was staying2* stayed with him the whole night. Later, he
was watching2*
watched a Chinese series. Sometimes he suddenly laughed like a child. I was just looking at him in silence. I feel it's fine.
1* - what isn't like other pronouns because you don't repeat the noun.
eg - The thing that I bought - thing+ that
or - What I bought- without 'thing'
2* past continuous for simultaneous actions or contrast long with short.
eg While I was watching TV my brother was studying. Or while I was having a bath the phone rang.