David
Sunday again As every 7 days, another Sunday has come. For me this is a shame as another Monday is too close but on the other hand other weekend is coming at the end of the week, so this is the only positive thing on a Sunday for me. Even Sundays are part of the weekend and should be a nice day for me isn´t as I am thinking all the day that it is the last day at the weekend and next day I have to wake up too early to go to work. I would like to feel what rich people feel as for them every day is like a Saturday they don´t have to be worried about go to work, but unfortunately for most of the humans life is not in this way and you need to spend at least a third of your life just working to be able to have a good life the other third of your time, as you need the last third just to rest or sleep.
2016年10月2日 18:08
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Sunday again

As happens every 7 days, another Sunday has come, (yet again). For me this is a shame as another Monday is too close but on the other hand another weekend is coming at the end of the week, so this is the only positive thing on about a Sunday for me.

Even Sundays are part of the weekend and they should be a nice day for me, but they're not isn´t as I am thinking all the day that it is the last day at of the weekend and the next day I have to wake up (far) too/so early to go to work. I would like to feel what rich people feel as because for them every day is like a Saturday, they don´t have to be worried worry about going to work. But unfortunately for most of the (us normal) humans, life is not in this way and you need to spend at least a third of your life just working in order to be able to have a good life in the other third of your time, and you need the last third just to rest or sleep.

I just suggest that you maybe work on the last sentence to make it clearer about the thirds:) I enjoyed reading it.

Very funny:) I have corrected some rather than edited it to keep your original creativity:)

2016年10月2日
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