Marsel
Well, we had homeless cats near our house at the village. When they gave a birth the kittens, I offered my parents to give them to somebody. I created ads on the Internet, but nobody took them. We started off finding another ways of giving them home (because cold days have begun and they apparently couldn't live in the street). We found a nursery for cats and gave them here. And that was really cool, that we saved them. I felt relief, my parents too. A story with happy end, by the way, heh!
2021年12月15日 13:08
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Well, we had homeless cats near our house in the village. When they gave birth, I tried to give the kittens to different people. I placed ads on the internet, but nobody wanted them. We started off finding other ways of giving them home (because the colder days of the year have begun and the kittens, couldn't survive on the street). So, we found a nursery for cats and gave them a home and that was really cool, that we were able to save them. I felt relieved and so did my parents. A story with a happy ending.
Hello Marsel, I hope you are well! Thank you for sharing this amazing deed. It was so heartwarming to read how you helped those kittens. Do you personally have any pets? I think your text is very well written. I fixed up your grammar a bit and made it flow. I hope this helps. If you are looking for any lessons to improve your English feel free to send me a message I would be happy to help. Hope you had an amazing day! Anouk
2021年12月15日
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Well, we had homeless cats near our house at the village. When they gave a birth the kittens, I offered my parents to give them to somebody. I created ads on the Internet, but nobody took them. We started off finding another ways of giving them home (because cold days have begun and they apparently couldn't live in the street). We found a nursery for cats and gave them here. And that was really cool, that we saved them. I felt relief, my parents too. A story with happy end, by the way, heh!
2022年5月7日
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