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• He sheepishly admitted that he hadn't really put much effort into it.
• Even the loud ringing of the doorbell could not wake up the sound-asleep residents.
• When I got back to the apartment, absolutely drained, I ran into some wide-awake young people on their way to a party.
• Some people say that it is only conscious citizens who are doing their best to reduce climate change.
• Since my sick son couldn't handle the chores, my healthy son took care of them.
• I accidentally bumped into a lady on the street, and her upset husband shot me a hateful look.
• The teacher was super strict and wouldn't forgive even the most apologetic student.