Pablo Wang
Hello guys, could you please help to check if it's correct in grammar? Do you like watching starts at night? I think I’m really into watching this kind of things and I think it’s a quite poetic romantic thing. I always imagined the scene that I’m sitting on a balcony under the starry night sky and with the one I love. we are each having a cup of hot coffee on our hands and talking about our futures our dreams our worries. I think it will make our relationship take a step further. And if I sit with my friends and we can just feel cool breeze brushes soft softly against our face, look up to the sky and leave all our troubles and worries behind. (For “the one I love” part, should I use past continuous tense? And for “friends” part is that okay use in Present simple and future tense?) By the way, I'm looking for a language partner who can help me with my English Grammar, In return I can help you with your Chinese grammar or culture. Just check my profile and feel free to text me!
2021年11月13日 11:57
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It's better to post this as an Exercise :) 1. watching stars 2. poetic and romantic 3. the scene where 4. night sky with the one 5. We will each have a cup...and talk about our future, our dreams, our worries. 6. our relationship grow closer. 7. feel the cool breeze brush Your tenses are fine in both cases besides the corrections above. I can help you with your English grammar and I know Chinese as well. If you're interested, please check out my teacher profile and feel free to book a lesson :)
2021年11月14日
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Do you like watching stars at night? I’m really into watching these kinds of things and I think it’s quite poetic and romantic. I've always imagined the scene where I’m sitting on a balcony under the starry night sky, with the one I love. We each have a cup of hot coffee in our hands and we are talking about our future, our dreams and our worries. I think it would take our relationship a step further. I can sit with my friend and we can just feel the cool breeze brush softly against our faces, look up to the sky and leave all our troubles and worries behind.
2021年11月14日
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